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we’re both so bad at the nuance and subtlety of seduction,
the smiles never leave our faces.
the fact we can’t care less what the other is saying
is sure sign what we’re looking for.
this is a race between two out of shape predators
forced to give up on prey.
we lost that killer touch-
the patience and stealth
you need against the quicker kind.
we’ve found out hard how brute strength and
desperate hunger are useless if you can’t get close
can’t sneak up next to the target.
now this cannibal want got us going
after another hunter
and at least we still kept some of the hunter skill
to be able to sniff each other out.
now it’s just a matter of who fucks up first-
just two vicious savages after the same thing
waiting to pounce
waiting to be on top
©2007-2010 ~teenagejesus
:iconteenagejesus:

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(for Leane)

i belive the term is cougar.

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:iconmissxscissorhands:
your writing - i've missed it.

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"There are tragedies far worse than death; things you couldn't even imagine." - David Fisher
:iconfriskyryski:
Clever, very clever. I love it.

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Rykki
:iconheartbeatsroverated:
Settling for like in place of love. I liked the poem and the cougar comment.

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